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matt · Post 21 Posted 28-11-09

This new direction (the road sign) kind of makes the pitch in the background an arbitrary addition and correct me if I'm wrong, but the dimensions have been squeezed vertically to fit it in, no?

If you remove it entirely you could make the sign bigger and have more space to push the emotion theme. At the moment it seems quite stoic and flat; unemotional. A good match is a whirlwind of excitement and emotion all of which is entirely unpredictable; despite the nice textures and colours, the poster's not yet conveying that.

Jimlad · Post 22 Posted 28-11-09

The road sign makes me think it's an away match and I'm in the car. Puts me in mind of anticipating the match.

theking79 · Post 23 Posted 28-11-09

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Originally Posted by Jimlad

The road sign makes me think it's an away match and I'm in the car. Puts me in mind of anticipating the match.

That's kind of what I want the audience to feel

theking79 · Post 24 Posted 03-12-09

update:

I have added the background motorway and changed the whole thing around a bit.

tim · Post 25 Posted 03-12-09

still not sure.

big improvement, it just feels a little fake because of the animation

Becky · Post 26 Posted 03-12-09

I really like the concept, but like tim said the smileys are a bit out of place (although cute). What about graffitied smileys or something?

Levi · Post 27 Posted 04-12-09

my biggest issue is that the signpost is stuck in the middle of the fast lane of a motorway, it just looks wrong as it would never be there

theking79 · Post 28 Posted 04-12-09

like this?

tim · Post 29 Posted 04-12-09

i thing the problem is it looks cartoony but the rest of the photo is 100% real.

also, as levi said, their is a MASSIVE problem that it's in the middle of the freaking road!

theking79 · Post 30 Posted 04-12-09

ok ill change the background picture, ive changed the faces to a more realistic graffiti.

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Jimlad EAT DIRT!! 326 Posts Tyne & Wear	The road sign makes me think it's an away match and I'm in the car. Puts me in mind of anticipating the match. Portfolio DeviantArt Just pinning some ideas to some paper with a pencil.
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theking79 Junior Member 16 Posts	update: I have added the background motorway and changed the whole thing around a bit.
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tim Onartis-basher 4,302 Posts	still not sure. big improvement, it just feels a little fake because of the animation Dr. Frappucino
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Becky Senior Member 557 Posts New Forest	I really like the concept, but like tim said the smileys are a bit out of place (although cute). What about graffitied smileys or something? Print & Pixels / Tweet me! / DeviantART / Print & Pixels on Facebook
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Levi Isn't that lovely? 1,807 Posts Norfolk	my biggest issue is that the signpost is stuck in the middle of the fast lane of a motorway, it just looks wrong as it would never be there Image Resolutions - It's in need of an update which is currently in progress >>>>
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theking79 Junior Member 16 Posts	like this?
	Post 28 Posted 04-12-09

tim Onartis-basher 4,302 Posts	i thing the problem is it looks cartoony but the rest of the photo is 100% real. also, as levi said, their is a MASSIVE problem that it's in the middle of the freaking road! Dr. Frappucino
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theking79 Junior Member 16 Posts	ok ill change the background picture, ive changed the faces to a more realistic graffiti.
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