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theking79 is offline
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perhaps something along the lines of this could show shock alot more.

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Last edited by theking79; 27-11-09 at 01:08 AM..
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Developed another idea:

Personally I think this is a lot better, what do you think about it?

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  Quote Post 12 Posted 27-11-09
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Looks much better in my opinion. Better concept

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  Quote Post 13 Posted 27-11-09
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Looks much better in my opinion. Better concept

Happinesss ?
oops will be corrected

  Quote Post 14 Posted 27-11-09
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personally I'd have used spaghetti junction as the map if you want to go in that direction, represents the muddle and mixture of emotions rather than just a singular one as implied by the single junction.



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  Quote Post 15 Posted 27-11-09
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Another one:


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  Quote Post 16 Posted 27-11-09
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Definitely going in the right direction.

(See what I did there?)



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Just pinning some ideas to some paper with a pencil.
  Quote Post 17 Posted 27-11-09
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I'll just check the A to Z.

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  Quote Post 18 Posted 27-11-09
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Can you have one with Boredom on it.



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  Quote Post 19 Posted 27-11-09
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i like it but it doesn't bring out any emotion in me, i think it looks like a campaign poster, it kinda makes me want to quit smoking, and i don't even smoke! i do like the layout texture, and colours tho.

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