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theking79 · 08:29 PM

Another one:

Jimlad · Post 17 Posted 27-11-09

Definitely going in the right direction.

(See what I did there?)

Typo · Post 18 Posted 27-11-09

I'll just check the A to Z.

Ah yes, football. Out of my League.

on me head son.

Typo · Post 19 Posted 27-11-09

Can you have one with Boredom on it.

bentzak · Post 20 Posted 28-11-09

i like it but it doesn't bring out any emotion in me, i think it looks like a campaign poster, it kinda makes me want to quit smoking, and i don't even smoke! i do like the layout texture, and colours tho.

Z

matt · Post 21 Posted 28-11-09

This new direction (the road sign) kind of makes the pitch in the background an arbitrary addition and correct me if I'm wrong, but the dimensions have been squeezed vertically to fit it in, no?

If you remove it entirely you could make the sign bigger and have more space to push the emotion theme. At the moment it seems quite stoic and flat; unemotional. A good match is a whirlwind of excitement and emotion all of which is entirely unpredictable; despite the nice textures and colours, the poster's not yet conveying that.

Jimlad · Post 22 Posted 28-11-09

The road sign makes me think it's an away match and I'm in the car. Puts me in mind of anticipating the match.

theking79 · Post 23 Posted 28-11-09

Quote:

Originally Posted by Jimlad

The road sign makes me think it's an away match and I'm in the car. Puts me in mind of anticipating the match.

That's kind of what I want the audience to feel

theking79 · Post 24 Posted 03-12-09

update:

I have added the background motorway and changed the whole thing around a bit.

tim · Post 25 Posted 03-12-09

still not sure.

big improvement, it just feels a little fake because of the animation

Becky · Post 26 Posted 03-12-09

I really like the concept, but like tim said the smileys are a bit out of place (although cute). What about graffitied smileys or something?

Levi · Post 27 Posted 03-12-09

my biggest issue is that the signpost is stuck in the middle of the fast lane of a motorway, it just looks wrong as it would never be there

theking79 · Post 28 Posted 03-12-09

like this?

tim · Post 29 Posted 03-12-09

i thing the problem is it looks cartoony but the rest of the photo is 100% real.

also, as levi said, their is a MASSIVE problem that it's in the middle of the freaking road!

theking79 · Post 30 Posted 04-12-09

ok ill change the background picture, ive changed the faces to a more realistic graffiti.

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theking79 Junior Member 18 Posts	Another one: Last edited by theking79; 27-11-09 at 08:29 PM..
	Post 16 Posted 27-11-09

Jimlad Fezzes are cool 901 Posts Newcastle, UK	Definitely going in the right direction. (See what I did there?) JIM ALGAR // Portfolio / Blog / Email Trust me... I'm an illustrator
	Post 17 Posted 27-11-09

Typo Illustration/design 2,212 Posts North Shields UK	I'll just check the A to Z. Ah yes, football. Out of my League. on me head son. www.thewholehogg.co.uk 'inside out, upside down and wrong way around'
	Post 18 Posted 27-11-09

Typo Illustration/design 2,212 Posts North Shields UK	Can you have one with Boredom on it. www.thewholehogg.co.uk 'inside out, upside down and wrong way around'
	Post 19 Posted 27-11-09

bentzak designer man! 99 Posts bournemouth	i like it but it doesn't bring out any emotion in me, i think it looks like a campaign poster, it kinda makes me want to quit smoking, and i don't even smoke! i do like the layout texture, and colours tho. Z
	Post 20 Posted 28-11-09

Jimlad Fezzes are cool 901 Posts Newcastle, UK	The road sign makes me think it's an away match and I'm in the car. Puts me in mind of anticipating the match. JIM ALGAR // Portfolio / Blog / Email Trust me... I'm an illustrator
	Post 22 Posted 28-11-09

theking79 Junior Member 18 Posts	update: I have added the background motorway and changed the whole thing around a bit.
	Post 24 Posted 03-12-09

tim Senior Member 4,378 Posts	still not sure. big improvement, it just feels a little fake because of the animation nobody?
	Post 25 Posted 03-12-09

Becky Senior Member 826 Posts New Forest	I really like the concept, but like tim said the smileys are a bit out of place (although cute). What about graffitied smileys or something? Print & Pixels / Twitter / Behance / DeviantART / Facebook
	Post 26 Posted 03-12-09

Levi Isn't that lovely? 2,332 Posts Norfolk	my biggest issue is that the signpost is stuck in the middle of the fast lane of a motorway, it just looks wrong as it would never be there Image Resolutions - It's in need of an update which is currently in progress >>>>
	Post 27 Posted 03-12-09

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theking79 Junior Member 18 Posts	like this?
	Post 28 Posted 03-12-09

tim Senior Member 4,378 Posts	i thing the problem is it looks cartoony but the rest of the photo is 100% real. also, as levi said, their is a MASSIVE problem that it's in the middle of the freaking road! nobody?
	Post 29 Posted 03-12-09

theking79 Junior Member 18 Posts	ok ill change the background picture, ive changed the faces to a more realistic graffiti.
	Post 30 Posted 04-12-09

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